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  • So, as some of you mighy know, I've had the idea of a character not being okay with younger-brother-older-sister relation for quite a while now. Remember about 20's Law (explained later on)? Since this is a topic which I believe not everyone might find friendly enough, I've been trying to find ways in which this particular character can be enjoyed by all. That's why, I may or may not change the previous concept of 20's Law, but I need all of your help. Just tell me, which of the concepts below you find more acceptable:

    1. 20's Law: Anything that can go wrong (when the younger brother and older sister are together, of course), will go wrong. It's just like Murphy's Law, but is specific and much more dangerous.

    2. Dr. 20: A ghost (or a viewer) will be there seeing what's going on, commenting on how much they hate seeing the 2 (or 3) together, it should not be allowed and sometimes even trying to separate them, which will probably fail most of the time (depending on the situation). 

    So these are the 2 ideas I have so far. To be honest, I have many memes and ideas in my mind related to this concept, but I cannot reveal them if people feel offended. I may even use both of these concepts together, but I need to know your thoughts. If you have any idea other than these 2, please do tell me. Overall, I need to find out the friendliest way to express something unfriendly without meaning anything wrong.

    I believe you will understand what I'm trying to explain. Please don't get me wrong, okay?

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    • Beaker09 wrote:
      So, as some of you mighy know, I've had the idea of a character not being okay with younger-brother-older-sister relation for quite a while now. Remember about 20's Law (explained later on)? Since this is a topic which I believe not everyone might find friendly enough, I've been trying to find ways in which this particular character can be enjoyed by all. That's why, I may or may not change the previous concept of 20's Law, but I need all of your help. Just tell me, which of the concepts below you find more acceptable:

      1. 20's Law: Anything that can go wrong (when the younger brother and older sister are together, of course), will go wrong. It's just like Murphy's Law, but is specific and much more dangerous.

      2. Dr. 20: A ghost (or a viewer) will be there seeing what's going on, commenting on how much they hate seeing the 2 (or 3) together, it should not be allowed and sometimes even trying to separate them, which will probably fail most of the time (depending on the situation). 

      So these are the 2 ideas I have so far. To be honest, I have many memes and ideas in my mind related to this concept, but I cannot reveal them if people feel offended. I may even use both of these concepts together, but I need to know your thoughts. If you have any idea other than these 2, please do tell me. Overall, I need to find out the friendliest way to express something unfriendly without meaning anything wrong.

      I believe you will understand what I'm trying to explain. Please don't get me wrong, okay?

      So which siblings are being attacked? Why does the Ghost (I'm choosing 2) why does the Ghost hate siblings?

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    • As I've mentioned, younger brother older sisters.

      And that's a painful backstory.

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  • I admit, I've been hooked on Infinity Train since book one (and how about that recent ep? DAMN!) And I keep thinking, what would happen if someone from another network found themselves on the train? So I gave the idea to Amanda, and she's gonna find herself on the train.

    What happens is that after another incodent with Murphy's Law,. Elliot finally explodes on Milo and says he hates him. That causes Milo to become so depressed he runs away from home. Soon both Melissa and Zack are missing too and everyone is convinced they went with him. This worries Amanda to no end and she confronts Ellot about what he said, but Bradley counters by throwing her perfectionism back in her face, saying she ought to be glad he;'s gone, now he can;t mess anything up. He brings up how she didn;t want to be his science partner and how she was so afrid of him messing up the dance. She's convinced she;'s a hippocrite and runs off in tears.

    She becomes determined to find Milo and try to make it up to him for what she did before, but during her search the train pulls up and she finds herself sucked into it. The number on her hand is about 87 and The Cat appears to explain what she;s doing on the train and how she has to figure out her issues to bring down the number.

    That's all I got so far, mainly cause I haven;t seen the final two eps yet. But what do you think of Amanda being on the train? 

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    • Why the cat? Why not One-One, the original conductor? And I'm fine with Amanda being on the train, but I'd like t see Eliot on there too, to lean not to be nasty to poor Milo, he said he hated him.

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    • Krazy4Kris wrote:
      Why the cat? Why not One-One, the original conductor?

      And I'm fine with Amanda being on the train, but I'd like t see Eliot on there too, to lean not to be nasty to poor Milo, he said he hated him.

      For the same reason One-One isn;t in Book 2, he;s driving the train! But he might make an appearance near the end of Amanda's journey. Besides, I like The Cat too. Second to One-One (my own favorite)

      Well, I figured Amanda had to solve her issues with her perfectionism, her obsession with order, and her guilt from the way she used to treat Milo before. In a way she starts to blame herself for Milo running away, thinking that she should have been there for Milo and she feels she could have done more. 

      Though near the end when her number goes down to zero the door doesn;t drop her off at her home, rather One-One fixes it so that she gets dropped off at a boat dock where Milo, Melissa, and Zack are preparing to board a boat. One-One urges her to hurry and try and stop them. 

      I'll have to see the final eps topnight to find out what happens to MT and wether or not she'll be in this cross-over. 

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    • oh okey, good luck with your crossover :) I'll be watching the final eps tomorrow.

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    • Krazy4Kris wrote:
      oh okey, good luck with your crossover :)

      I'll be watching the final eps tomorrow.

      I gotta finish my current story first. 

      Well, I won;t give it away then. 

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  • Although I'm only halfway through, I can see how hard you (and TMMLWG) have worked on this! 

    Kris: She's really relatable and you listen to her because you want her to become a better person.

    Wally: My boi is just hilarious! And his secret crush is handled well. Usually I don't really like the secret crush that the crush doesn't know about, but this works!

    Sara: Everyline she says I can just hear Kate! You to really capture her well!

    Faria: Relatable as being lonely and just wanting friends. Even though Kris is the main protagonist, you still think Kris is being a big jerk. But you always hope she can realize her mistakes and become better.

    Neal: Cameo's a little weird and mysterious, but made my laugh for quite some time!

    Great job! Can't wait to read more!

    Persevere, Live and Learn, and Seize the Day! - WaffleTail

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  • Ok, so it's been about a day, and your story on AO3 has already 22 hits (not bad for a first day AT ALL) and, get this, 3 KUDOS! In comparison, most of my stories have between 0-3, with only 3 getting to 7. And many of my stories have popular characters! So Kris, who is way more known than Milolissa and Milanda, is already as popular!

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  • I don't know if it's still relevant, but I'm thinking about voicing for the project. How would that be technically possible?

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  • Kris 1 is about to be posted on FF.Net and AO3. I'll forward you any comments, subscriptions, favorites, hits, etc.

    Congratulations!

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  • My Mom did this for my birthday!

    ...Ok, I can't show you for some reason, but my Mom made a t-shirt out of your poster!

    Also, do you want me to wear it only inside or can I take it out? It's your art, so I wanted to ask.

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  • Hope you doing well!

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  • Since I 100 percent trust your judgement, I wanted to send you the Kris music video and interview to see what you think.

    Anything you think needs to be changed, dropped, added or you just like please say!

    (Dark screen)

    (Kris’ house is shown, with its balcony that has a view of the sunset and the stars)

    (The sky is painted orange, night is falling, and a 19 year old girl enters the balcony after yet another fight)

    Kris: Ok, Mother, I said I was sorry!

    Lian Chang: Sorry isn’t good enough, Kristina Chang! That… That… Trash will not be in MY living room! It is bad enough that you are obsessed with this inane children’s show! Must you shove it in my face at every opportunity?

    Kris (Furious): I LEFT THE FUNKO POP IN THERE BY ACCIDENT!

    Lian Chang: Kristina Chang! You will NOT raise your voice at me! If you will, I will take away your Fan Club privileges!

    Kris (Shocked): But mother! That’s not fair!

    Lian Chang: This is your final warning!

    (Lian leaves, and Gary Chang, Kris’ dad, enters quietly, sitting down on the swing seat they have on the balcony)

    (Kris, furious, begins to imitate her mother)

    Kris (Imitating Lian): “Ooh! Look at me! I’m Lian Chang and I know SO much better! This is trash! You are trash!” Blegh! Why does it all suck so much?!

    (Dr. Zone, her imaginary companion version, hands her an imaginary pillow, which she screams into and throws away)

    Gary (humorously): Screaming into and throwing imaginary pillows again?

    (Kris turns around, embarrassed)

    Kris: I don’t do it all the time…

    (Gary smiles, and Kris sits down next to him)

    (He runs his hand through her hair to calm her down, the only person Kris allows this privilege to)

    Gary: What’s eating you, gumdrop? Though I have a pretty good idea of what it is.

    Kris (exasperated): It’s mother!

    Gary (sighs): Called it. Unfortunately.

    Kris: She’s being super unreasonable! I left the Funko pop of “Dr. Zone Posing For A Funko Pop While Breakdancing” on the living room table by accident! I know how “terrible” it is! It was an accident! That’s all! WHY IS SHE ALWAYS ON MY CASE?!

    Gary: Calm down, gumdrop. Count to 10.

    (Kris looks at her father, still angry, but his calming voice and loving eyes convince her)

    (She closes her eyes, takes 10 deep breaths, and counts to 10 while doing so)

    Kris: 1… 2… 3… 4… 5… 6… 7… 8… 9… 10…

    (Her father whispers the numbers, something she always finds comforting)

    (She opens her eyes and smiles at him)

    (She settles into his embrace, her ears catching his slow, soothing heart beat)

    (She’s home)

    Kris: …Dad…

    (Gary stares at the distance, content)

    Gary: Yes, gumdrop?

    Kris: …Do you think… I could ever…

    (Kris thinks of her mother, who constantly berates her)

    (She thinks of Sara and Wally, who seem to be far more acceptable than her)

    (She thinks of Milo…)

    (And how she treated him)

    (And she remembers HIM. The terrible man who hurt her when she was only 6)

    (Could she ever…)

    Kris: …Be someone?

    (Gary looks at her concerned)

    Gary: Kris… Where are you coming with this? You’re great, just the way you are…

    (Kris stands up)

    Kris: No I’m not! Look at me. I’m Kris to some, Kristina Chang to her. I want to be a doctor, but will I ever be allowed to pass Medical School? Will I even pass Medical School if I got the chance? I… I treat my friends terribly…. A day doesn’t go by where I don’t fight with my mother…

    (She looks at him, her eyes welling with tears)

    Kris: I… I don’t know how I can improve. If I can improve. And even if I did…

    (She sighs)

    Kris: …Who am I?

    (Gary sadly looks at his daughter, and the massive pain she is feeling)

    Kris: Sometimes… I feel like… Like I really don’t belong here. Like I’m supposed to be…

    (She looks at the stars, home of her hero)

    Kris: …Someplace else.

    (Gary approaches her, trying to comfort her)

    Gary: Kris… Gumdrop, you…

    Kris (walks to the edge of the balcony): I know it doesn’t make any sense.

    (Gary, realizing Kris needs some alone time, leaves her be)

    Gary: …Just know… That I love you.

    (Kris can’t help but smile through her tears at that)

    (She sighs)

    (“Go The Distance” from “Hercules” begins to play)

    “Go The Distance” by Kris (Written by The Milo Murphy’s Law Wiki Guy and Krazy4Kris)

    (Galaxy, Kris’ cat, snuggles up to her)

    (Imaginary Dr. Zone perches on her shoulder and watches her, concerned)

    (Kris looks at the stars)

    Kris (singing terribly, but her HEART’S IN IT, OK?!): “I have often dreamed…”

    (She imagines herself on a street in Danville)

    Kris: “Of a far… Well, actually, pretty close, but still, place…”

    (Kris seems…)

    (Happy)

    Kris: “Where a great, warm, welcome…”

    (A bright light shines in her eyes, but it is inviting and loving)

    Kris (closes her eyes, and starts to feel it): “Will be waiting for me…”

    (Kris sees a crowd of people cheer for her as she stretches her arms to the sides and feels the warmth of the final embers of the setting sun)

    Kris: “And the crowds will cheer… When they see my face…”

    (The crowd chants her name)

    Kris (getting encouraged): “And a voice keeps saying…”

    (Kris, 6 years old, watches Dr. Zone)

    Dr. Zone (TV): Remember, kids! It may take a while, but in time, you too could be a hero!

    (6 year old Kris smiles, and it dissolvers into present Kris smiling)

    Kris: “…This is where I’m meant to be…”

    (She goes walking in the streets of Danville, night having fallen)

    (Galaxy is perched on her head… Somehow. And Dr. Zone is following her like some kind of force ghost)

    Kris (getting a bit more determined): “I will find my way…”

    (She passes a poster for “SPACE… IN SPACE! (THEY SAID IT WASN’T POSSIBLE!)”)

    Kris: “I can go the distance…”

    (She begins to climb a tree)

    Kris: “I’ll be there someday…”

    (A shopkeeper enters)

    Shopkeeper: HEY! STOP THAT TERRIBLE SINGING…

    (Suddenly, Krazy4Kris teleports, throws the man into a black hole, and, looking at us, goes “Shh…”)

    (He then teleports back home)

    Kris (still climbing): “…If I can be strong!”

    (Kris shows surprising strength to not only climb the tree, but flip onto the tallest branch, and sit on the very top)

    (Galaxy settles on her lap and purrs)

    (She gently rubs his belly)

    Kris: “I know every mile…”

    (The screen plays future scenes in the background while in the foreground, Kris sits on the tree:

    (Kris seeing that Sara has made a new friend, and failing to overcome her jealousy, but succeeding in the end)

    (Kris seeing that Wally loves her, and failing to deal with her own emotions, but succeeding in the end)

    (Kris coming into a major conflict with her mother and her extended family from China, but succeeding in the end)

    Kris (knowing the journey will be hard, but still trying her best): “…Will be worth my while…”

    (She smiles at a shooting star)

    Kris: “…I would go most anywhere to feel… Like I… Belong…”

    (Kris closes her eyes and imagines herself in space, floating)

    (She is dressed like Dr. Zone, Galaxy floats next to her with a blaster in its paw, and she is surrounded by mysterious friends)

    Kris (getting more determined by the second): “Down an unknown road…”

    (She fights an evil alien queen)

    Kris: “…To embrace my fate…”

    (Kris fights an alien army)

    Kris: “…Though that road may wonder…”

    (Kris sees the shadows of her parents, Sara, Wally and Milo)

    Kris: “…It will lead me to you…”

    (Kris is comforted by her Dr. Zone imaginary friend)

    (She smiles)

    Kris: “…And a thousand years… Would be worth the wait…”

    (Kris looks at earth from a spaceship)

    Kris: “It might take a lifetime…”

    (Kris decides that no matter how many mistakes she’s made, and no matter how many she’ll make, she’s going to keep trying)

    Kris: “…But somehow I’ll see it through…”

    (Kris, with her guitar, belts out the rest of the song, overcoming obstacle after obstacle)

    Kris: “And I won’t look back!

    I can go the distance!

    And I’ll stay on track!

    No, I won’t accept defeat!

    It’s an uphill slope,

    But I won’t lose hope!

    ‘Till I go the distance and my journey is complete!

    Guitar solo!

    (Kris does a sick guitar solo, her eyes dancing with excitement as she hits the chords and plays with all her heart)

    (Galaxy is on bass and Dr. Zone is on drums)

    (Kris then takes it slow, a spotlight on her now)

    Kris: “…But to look beyond the glory is the hardest part…”

    (She imagines all her friends and family, and how much she loves them)

    Kris: “…For a hero’s strength is measured by her heart…”

    (Kris, goes back home, her heart swelling with hope)

    Kris: “I will beat the odds!

    I can go the distance!”

    (She races to her basement, puts her Dr. Zone hat on and races around the room, dancing)

    Kris: “I will face the world!

    Fearless, proud and strong!”

    (She looks in the mirror and poses proudly)

    Kris: “I will be a hero!

    I can go the distance!

    ‘Till I find my heroes welcome

    Right, where, I, be… Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

    (Kris plops down on the floor…)

    (Happy)

    (Song ends)

    (Wild applause)

    (Camera cuts to Amanda, Sara and Lydia)

    Amanda: I’m not sure I understood it all, but I can relate to the feelings of failure and disappointment in myself!

    (Beat)

    Sara: …Do you need to vent a bit?

    Amanda: Dios Mios, yes!

    Sara: Ok, after the show, we’ll have a little girls night, what do you say?

    Lydia: Anything to help my bestie!

    Amanda (quiet): …Thanks, guys.

    TMMLWG: What about you, Sara and Sunshine? What did you think?

    Sara: Well, Kris is one of my best friends, so I really liked it! I’m happy to see her doing better! And I believe in her!

    Lydia: I’ll admit, I didn’t really get all of it, but the presentation and the DRAMA were top notch! I was moved! I was stirred! I was shook! But just in case…

    (Lydia literally opens a door into her heart, who has her hairdo)

    Lydia: Hi, Heart! What did you think?

    Lydia’s Heart: I WAS SOOOOOOO MOVED! IT WAS, LIKE, TOTALLY THE BEST! #TEARSFLOW,INEEDSOMEJELL-O!

    (Suddenly, a picture falls out of Lydia’s chest, showing Bradley with a big heart drawn around his face)

    (Lydia, blushing furiously, eats the picture)

    Lydia: …I have no idea what that was! No idea at all!

    (Bradley faints again)

    Lydia’s Heart: HE’S SOOOOO DREAMY! HE’S THE ROMEO TO MY JULIET! THE KYLO REN TO MY REY! THE CAVENDISH TO MY DAKOTA!

    Dakota: What is she talking about?

    Cavendish: Who knows?

    (They resume to make out passionately to “Careless Whisper”)

    (Mr. Drako looks at this and dabs)

    Amanda: Wow. This is getting out of hand.

    (TMMLWG T-Poses)

    TMMLWG: What makes you think that?

    (Kris finally comes out for her interview)

    (She gets applause, and she can’t help but smile)

    (She sits down on a chair in front of them, Galaxy sitting on her lap, sleeping)

    Kris: Hey, guys!

    Amanda: Hello!

    Sara: Hey, Kris!

    (They do their secret handshake and hug)

    Lydia: Hey, total stranger! Until mysterious circumstances force us to work together, and we team up against a super villain, and through a dangerous spy mission, we become inseprable! Ooh! Another movie idea! Am I the serious one, or the loose canon?

    (She does the wave and shoots out finger guns)

    Kris (dry): …How will I ever choose?

    Amanda: Anyway, we’d like to ask you a few questions.

    Kris: Ok!

    Amanda: First question: You’ve done really well so far, but do you think you can pull off a victory into the fourth round? You will undoubtedly be one of the most popular contestants if you win, especially with the rumors I’ve heard of who’s the contestant.

    TMMLWG: Rumors? From whom?

    Amanda: I have a VERY reliable source.

    ?: It’s definitely Mark Ruffalo. She doesn’t stand a chance.

    TMMLWG: Mark Ruffalo? Amanda, you know he isn’t in this show.

    Amanda: Oh no! I was blinded by my want for him to be in this!

    TMMLWG: Aren’t we all?

    (Amanda and TMMLWG pose for a picture)

    Amanda and TMMLWG: RUFFALO FANGIRLS!

    (Sara and Lydia stare)

    Amanda: And again, I am allowed to be weird too!

    WaffleTail: BUT WHO WAS THE CULPRIT?

    (? Is revealed to be Doof)

    TMMLWG and WaffleTail: …Yeah. That makes sense.

    (Everyone facepalms, even Doof)

    Kris: To answer your question, I’d say yes. I have had some close calls, but I think I have a big enough following! Besides, I have a secret weapon…

    (Beat)

    Amanda: …Well?

    Kris: Oh, not now. But soon…

    Sara: Mysterious!

    Lydia: Exciting!

    Amanda: Time wasting. We’re on a schedule, people!

    Sara: You were distracted by Mark Ruffalo!

    Amanda: Is that a bad thing? Back me up here, Wiki Guy!

    TMMLWG: What she said.

    Amanda: Thank you.

    TMMLWG (Maui): You’re welcome!

    WaffleTail: This has been a bizarre episode.

    (Turns into a JoJo’s character. “Pillar Men” plays)

    Sara: Second question! Anything to tell us about the music video?

    Kris: Besides its total accuracy, both happy parts and sad parts? I guess I can say I was confused by the vision of Wally being in love with me. That’s not true!

    (Wally, in his house, looking at his shrine of unsent valentines for Kris, and pictures of the two of them. He even has a Kris cardboard cutout who is hugging happy cutouts of her father and mother)

    (He is currently working on a giant statue of her made of Beat energy drinks)

    Wally (wearing a Kris mask, sighs): Oh, Wally. What are you going to do?

    Moose with monocle, reading newspaper and drinking tea: Tell her how you feel, young Wally.

    Wally: Oh, Moose with monocle, reading newspaper and drinking tea, I don’t know if that will work!

    Kris: He doesn’t like me like that at all!

    (Beat)

    Sara: It’s so oblivious, it makes Phineas seem less so!

    Isabella: Preach!

    Phineas: What?

    (Isabella panics)

    Isabella: NOTHING!

    (She erases Phineas’ memory)

    (She sighs)

    Isabella: Ferb!

    (Ferb enters)

    Ferb: Again?

    Isabella: Again.

    (They drag Phineas out)

    Lydia: Final question! Kris, anything to tell the audience?

    Kris: …No matter what mistakes you’ve made, you CAN be a hero. Don’t give up. Because if you try… You too could be exceptional.

    (She receives applause)

    Kris: Oh, and just in case I’m in danger of losing, here’s the person who will sway you to my side!

    (Kray4Kris arrives on a motorcycle)

    (he see a bunch of people considering not voting for Kris)

    Krazy4Kris: So… This all looks… Terrible.

    Kris: I’ve seen worse.

    Krazy4Kris: Sorry.

    Kris: No, we could use… A little worse.

    (Krazy4Kris starts walking to the crowd)

    Kris: Dude… Now might be a really good time for you to get Krazy4me…

    Krazy4Kris: That’s my secret, Kris… I’m always Krazy4Kris…

    (Krazy4Kris turns into the Hulk and punches the crowd’s voting pattern towards Kris)

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    • Thanks for the advice!

      I'm half way done with your latest story, so far it's really good!

      I was a little confused at the beggining, but I think that's just because I was tired.

      Great job!

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  • I saw that you removed the Zalissa stamp. I don't know if it was because of me or Melissafan1 or both, but I am touched by that! I do want to say that I respect all Zalissa shippers, they are totally legitimate, I just don't get the ship myself.

    But still, thank you!

    Also, little side note, I realized that Kris, Sara and Wally are all 19 in my timeline right now. Should we insert some lines about life before college for them?

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    • Ok! Thanks! You're a good friend, Krazy. I am lucky to have you.

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    • You're very welcome my friend :)

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