Man oh man your story for me (yes, I plan on reading your other Christmas stories as well). It's just so impressive!
I love all the small details in it. Perry always fake considering taking Doof's almond brittle tea, Doof telling Perry all of the past-future stuff that's happened with the characers. It's just really smart and enjoyable to read.
Also, I know Doof has never really been your favorite. But that's another great thing about your writing. You've never seen Doof as your favorite, but you still understand what your version of the character is going through. It's just emotional for me. And I LOVE Perry's hesitence toward visisting Stacy. I can say with 100% truth that no matter if they do revisit the Perry/Stacy ark in the Dwampyverse, it will never be as good as what you have thought of for you're ark.
I also just love thinking of Doof say "ass". I don't know why that's so funny to me.
Thanks my friend. You truly are legitametly better than the writers of the Dwampyverse. You understand what the characters are going for. But the Dwampyverse just usually takes a serious character momment and piles on 10 jokes on top of it.
When Doof was looking out the window trying to contain his sadness and fear of his "loss of purposs", I felt that man.
What else is there to say? Except, if Dan and Swampy want to improve there universe. They need to get people like you. If that's even possible.